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Wednesday, September 19, 2018

Central School Play

This is a letter I wrote to Central school Thanking them for inviting our school to watch their school play.  
Our school did a play a year ago and it was called Mahakiro. So they decided to invite our school.
Our school had a great time and enjoyed the play heaps.


 


Hannah
Makaraka School
137 Main Road
Gisborne


19/9/18


Central School
7 Central street


Dear Staff and Students of Central School,
I am writing this letter to thank you for inviting our whole school to come and watch your school play.  
I am a year 6 student and it is my last year at Makaraka School. I was very lucky to have watched your play this year
as I would not be able to watch it if it was next year, Thank you.  This is us - Anei Matou was a great topic to base your play
on as it had a great story behind it. Our school was excited by the performance and learning more about your school.
I liked the thoughts and effort you put into the play, because it showed how much you cared  about your school and the
performance. I found the change in your school over the years part of the play told me more and I learned more from it.  
The different topic through the scenes was really interesting and I enjoyed it. Expressing the different and great things
about your school. You effort and commitment ment a lot in terms of acing
The props were just amazing as well as the costumes how could you have made giant Captain Cook’s and Kiwa’s was
awesome.  Your narrators were great and I liked the way you shared around the microphone. The performance on stage
and the way you remembered it all was great and I know how it feels when you have to remember lots of things (Stressful).  
Your singing was outstanding. You are all very good performers from year 0-6.
Your school showed a great amount of courage and Kia mia ( standing proud ) for your school. Well done for your
performance it was a great experiences for our school and gave us more of an understanding and the background behind
your school.  Courage is the commitment to begin without any guarantee of success. Keep it up you should be very proud.
I hope you perform more plays over the year. You are on the way to fame.
Kind regards
Hannah


1 comment:

  1. A very well written letter Hannah. I really loved the way you described exactly what you liked and how much you enjoyed the show! I am sure they will enjoy reading it!

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